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I’m delirious and my cage is leaking a lake,,, onto Ch. 3

Steve gets treated like tis after saving her Mother . Kick Gwen to the Curb

this is non conceptual
or as others would call it
rape!
you are confused if you do not know the difference and should be prosecuted

A simple story of love you say.but complex enough to kick start a heart.

This story got my seemingly dry mouth start to salivate;) althogh I'm not a fan of the 'period' part the rest of your pungent odors turned me on so much!
A constant dream of mine involves sneaking into a girls locker room and hiding in a bin and while someone pushes it all around the room,women throw their sweaty clothes,panties,socks etc. in....Dear lord. That'll be my idea of heaven!! Inhaling all those different types of female Oders...😋

You had the gall to depict Jim as the victim. He cheats, he betrayed his wife But when she extracts her revenge He cannot cope. After all he was pussy whipped and he did not like being cuckold, did he. He did the betraying yet he could not handle the payback. What a wimp. He should have died in the accident because e became insufferable in the end. You did Sharons character an injustice. You actually betrayed her. As a writer you sold her out. She should have been depicted as strong and as a survivor yet you pathetically made her weak and insecure. She had suffered at the hands of her cheating husband yet when she extracted revenge you destroyed her character. Sharon is actually better off without weak dick Jim . As for Tammy she will tire soon of Jim and Jim deserves to be put into an old age home with no visitors. I hated Jim's character because he is a hypocrite and a weak pussy whipped man. Not your best last chapter. You did not do justice and tour ending was extremely weak because you sought favour in Jim. This was not your best work and YOU know it. I am truly disappointed.

This is actually quite wholesome. I hope they end up together

I cannot stop listening to these audio stories! I cannot get enough... DC

I was reading your story on my iPod and while I was moving the page up I accidentally hit the report button, please forgive me as it was definitely not on purpose. I enjoyed your story, it was different & kept me interested. Again I'm very sorry for hitting the report button.

Good work. I love the way he punished her. I also love the way she owns her submissiveness.

I hope there is a follow up on this story!

I read the first chapter of the Yo yo the other guy wrote and was sickened; not disgusted but sickened to the soul. There were supposed to be two people who loved each other, Jory and Stu, but Jory turned what I thought was a happy marriage into a travesty. Worse I thought Stu was totally complicit in the first phase; his wife's defilement. Then the 'big guy' the actor showed up and I knew this marriage was over.
Now I picked up cpete's sequel right after that first part, and honestly cpete made even less sense. OK Stu got past Myra, but pulling out the gun, then calling the police, and then having the whole thing go to court was absurd. Once Stu got rid of Myra he could have sent the 'big guy' on his way, then packed a bag and left. Poor Jory needed help, but Stu wasn't the one to provide it.
And about the original Yoyo writer; sorry I never read any of the subsequent chapters, and certainly never will.
Sorry cpete; you must have had your head in your ass when you wrote this. I mean gosh; you took somebody else's complete blather and wrote a sequel? What next a story about vampires, zombies, werewolves, and hobgoblins?

I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE ABOUT MEN AND WOMAN STRETCHING THEIR HOLES TO THE POINT OF BLEEDING AND ALMOST TEARING PUSSYS AND ASSHOLES WITH TOYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This chapter was so well done and fit the crossroads idea perfectly. Well Played. The plot moves along and a fun pace and the wild sex and drama is keeping it percolating with adventure and sexual excitement. Love the little competition and lite jealousy between the main girls and the wanting and willing whores fighting for John’s attention. That is just fun. Cheers

Not a fan of humiliation or forced sexual activity, so I struggled to finish this story. Now that the abuse is over, I would like to see what comes next
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Very good, enough to have read it three times. Thank you - 5 stars
somewhere east of Omaha

This was truly a hot story. However, I'm not one for the sexual assault or rape. I'm glad he likes it rough. Tiff's encounter was the hottest although I doubt that Ethan is a virgin.

Write your own story. You will never please all of your readers, but it’s important that you remain true to your vision. Keep up the great work. I check every day for this series.

“There are times i think she is as thick as a brick!”
Yes, however things do not work according to “human logic” and she has a shall we say troubled background.
Reading these chapters and comments is actually really uneasy knowing what is to come. There is actually a ton of foreshadowing about how little the brothers actually understand Ciara, especially without the bond. Ciara is unwittingly playing a very dangerous game in the bedroom and doesn’t know it.

I wish it was longer

This is a tremendously powerful romance story! I don't read many stories expressing such deep and moving fears and emotions, but this story faces both with honesty and courage.
I'm putting it in my top stories folder immeadiately!
Kydreamer

I am confused how good writing about an argument and some guys struggle to divorce his wife is Loving Wife. I found the storing boring, but it is well written.

One of the best stories I have read in a very long time. Got my hard and jacking. Niplles hard cock dripping

I love your writings but the ending was weird . I had to look back to remember all the characters since it was a long time getting the last chapter written.

We know only what we are told. The mind is a dark place with many dark passages.

But the human heart is capable of incredibly dark deceptions as well.

So what he has is faith and hope, not certainty. Probably the preponderance of the evidence is she did nothing. That is all he can go by.